The awesome day at Spencer park.

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report

Last Friday Ako Ngatahi, Ruma Toru, Ruma Wha and Wahi Ako  went to Spencer park, We went on the bus to Spencer park and some people went inside a car. I was excited to go to Spencer park and the sky was blue and it didn’t have clouds.

There were 150 people went Spencer park.  First we explore around the beach and pick up some shell and wood for a art. My legs were sore but it was still fun. We had something to eat on the beach and I was in group 4 with an adult and two teachers .

For the Lagoon walk it was fun to look at different bird we haven’t seen. My group saw a Tui it sound really different than a ordinary bird. I felt like I had the best day with 150 people coming to Spencer park.

Then we went to the playground and played for 5 minutes. I had some yummy lunch and it was chips, a sandwich, biscuits, a bar and I had milk in my lunch box.  It was fun at the playground and I was playing with Shontae, Mikayla, Talia. I played on the flying foxes and the climbing bored.

I learnt that a Tui sounds different than an ordinary bird and the bird is black and white and the beak black.  I felt so tried on the bus at end of the day. I thought about all of the beautiful birds I have seen.