REPLAY

This week I started to do a diary writing about 1 girl and a boy and it is called Replay. I have worked really hard on this, here is the link to the show The video called replay. I think my next step is to make it sound better I hope you enjoy my writing.

2030

Dear diary

Today is Saturday, I went into a dark gray tank that I couldn’t breathe in. I had to wear this face mask so it could protect my breathing.

I stood up to go to my beautiful sleep out to see my brother and I showed him a music tape that I found on the shadow floor outside. My brother wanted to listen to the music tape, but I said “No!” Then I put the music tape on the top shelf.

I said to my brother that you have to go to bed, but he said “In a minute”, then I said “Ok” then “See you in a minute but DON'T TOUCH THE MUSIC TAPE!” He said “Ok”.

Next I went out and went to bed for a beauty sleep, but my brother was taking a long time to come back to bed and I started to think that he went somewhere and took the music tape.

I went to the sleep-out to see if he was there, but he hasn’t there, so I had to sprint really fast to see if my brother was at the park…

I saw my brother. He was lying down and he didn’t have the face mask on but suddenly he was DEEEEAD!!  I was really sad I couldn’t believe it, but I need to get over it .