The Partys clouds

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Write a first person diary entry.

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Hello I have made a other writing about clouds. I have really work really hard on this writing, I think I could do better, but I try my best. Here is a link to the video called party's clouds and I hope you enjoy my writing.

The sky looked very pink and fluffy it almost looked like candy floss. It looked like a candy land that you could eat. The city looked amazing, It was light and colorful. I was so captivated that I couldn't stop taking pictures.

Hello I’m a girl and my name is Pom Pom, I'm a cloud and I have magic powers that I could make anything like pets, toys and babies. I feel magical because I can do anything with my powers.

When I make pets, toys and babies, some smart friendly bird comes and takes them away and gives them to the people that need them. Every time you look at a cloud like me it’s looks like you're up in the air and like your in a high rise.

I have made a duckling, cats, and puppy, I just use the cloud and my magic powers to made those pets. I have lots and lots of fun of making pets.

The other day the storm came it was pouring with Hailing rain. I was super grey I didn’t want to look at the other clouds, but if I did my magic powers will start to faint away. I couldn’t stop it but I was trying my hardest to stop it.

I had my head covering because I was waiting until the ganit rain stop.

2 days after it stopped I very happy because the last time it rain it took 10 days to stopped and you should never ever get the rain cloud angry again. I’m really happy because it stopped. It  turned out  to be a good day for the rain cloud and all of the friendly clouds too.