My Worst day ever

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W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

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I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened?
• Personal Comment:  How did the event

My worst walking ever

It was a beautiful sunny day I was going to the waterhole with my family.

It was a really really early morning I could see a group of lions lying in the sun  getting ready to pounce on the herd.  I  know that I am going to be attacked  But i know that I am weak! I tried to keep close to my mother.

As I was walking along  the river bank I saw the lions, I said OMG I can see a group of lions.The lions at  looking at the buffaloes.The buffaloes were running because the lions were trying to get  me .The lions are getting to choose to get me and the lions did got  me . When I got caught it was like BAM!!! ,  I could feel the wind blowing on the face and with butterfly. The lions was like OMG because i can see there eyes flashing and worms at my eyes like they were going to eat me. The buffalo went into a group then the crocodile and the lions was playing tug war . The daddy buffalo was tried to rescued me .

So now finally got out the enormous tug war and I now I’m finally tree.