It has been about a week in this rusty, messy, smelly old boat. I am Liam and I am a brave robot. The crew on this boat takes me and my robot friends everywhere. We are their guardians of Somalia.
My robot friends can save people and that makes me a hero. I heard yelling inside the rusty boat and it sounded like someone was fighting. I looked and there were pirates trying to take over the boat. I have a job to do, I hope they will learn their lesson.
I let my crew free to save the captain and fight the bad pirates. All of my robot friends help me by throwing the pirates overboard. We had to let more robots free and they thanked us. Once again we save the captain and take down the bad pirates.
Great story Keyana, but you missed some information from the video and there was no capitals for Robot.
ReplyDeleteHi Keyana I like your blog post it had blown me away and my socks ran away. Next time you could put more of the informaiton because you missed some from in the video.
ReplyDeleteHi Keyana!!,
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing about Somalia, I like the way you put some interesting words like Rusty, messy and smelly, Next time you could add more detail in your blog post, But you've done a great job!!, well done Keyana!
Elisha Mae.
Hey Keyana,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story about Somalia. We were writing about that story too when Miss Millard was in my class. Anyway I like what you said that you were a brave robot. That good work. Keep that good work up.