The Shiny Black Piano
For this week I have watched I video called The Piano here is the link for it The Link of the video called Piano
I hope you like my writing.
I sat at my shiny black piano reflecting about my beautiful, talented, caring wife. The music was penetrating my fingers and danced across the keyboard.
When I heard about wife, I was not happy I couldn’t stop crying and my heart was beating super fast. I started to play the song, It felt like my wife was playing the shiny black piano with me. This beat of the piano was really sad which reminded me of WW1. That day my wife passed away and it also reminded me of back in 1950s.
I really wish my beautiful wife was alive with me, but now she is in heaven I have to get over myself but I could still have sad moments. At this point I just wanted my wife to come back.
I know that was my grandson David when you was 7 I give he a present and it was a horse sick. When I was his age I loved ride and playing with horse sick. At least I still have him, he is know at the age of 13. I am really great I still loved him.
Wow Keyana! your opening paragraph really hooked me in. I like the way you incorporated language features into your writing. Next time make sure that you continue to expand your fantastic ideas. Keep up the great work.
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